jueves, 26 de julio de 2007

Quiero

Quiero ver la luna
prendida de tus ojos
y sentarme a la orilla de tu voz

Quiero ser tu niña
la flor de labios rojos
y besarte en mil colores siempre amor

Quiero ser la llama
quemando la distancias
uniendo nuestras manos bajo el sol

¿Quieres mi destino?
delfín de suaves brisas
mi niño.. mil suspiros de calor

Porque quiero ver destellos
y ráfagas de viento
bailando entre caricias y pasión

Y te juro seremos la sonrisa
grabada en la mirada

de un tierno, sincero y dulce amor

Elita

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22 comentarios:

Angie Sandino dijo...

Todo eso que quieres es tan hermoso, tan tierno y lo expresas en una forma tan transparente que me has dibuado una sonrisa...

eres un amor de ternura!!

Vicente Herrera Márquez dijo...

Hermoso

Lucila dijo...

Mágicas esas palabras.
Me gustaron.
Un placer conocerte.
Besos!

Salvador F. Cortéz dijo...

por tiempo que no pasaba
ya se me olvidaba tu sinceridad
me gusta como escribes, lo haces con deleite


besos y abrazos

_DeathDog o_david_correa pk hombre dijo...

Hermoso poema!
saludos

Amor dijo...

sí a todo
amor

Supermamá... dijo...

Hola Elita...
Gracias por tu primera visita, y espero se repita siempre que quieras. Yo he conocido tu ciudad y en ella tengo grandes amigos.
Tus poemas preciosos emiten dulzura y amor, sigue escribiendo, son hermosos.
Un fuerte abrazo desde el otro lado del charco.
bss

lágrimas de mar dijo...

divino poema
delicia leerlo
besos

lágrimas de mar

-Slowhand- dijo...

lo unico que quieres es amor?
eso decia al final de tu poema
pero como dice charli, NO SE PUEDE VIVIR DEL AMOR
SALUDOS

-Slowhand- dijo...

una persona que padese de deprecion poco siente el amor

Salvador F. Cortéz dijo...

Me alegra que te guste la forma de escribir, eso se agradece
como te lo habia dicho
me gusta tu sinceridad frente al amor
y por eso te sigo.

por ahi nos vemos


ah y te invito para q pases a
http://unhacerelamordeados.blogspot.com/

besos y abrazos

FiNi dijo...

uy!
no había visto esta entradaantes,yo pensaba que tu nueva entrada eran los fotopoemas.
Bueno Elita, este es un comentario para alentarte a que sigas escribiendo y te aventures cada día más en las letras, escribe, escribe,escribe...sin pensar en el resultado...luego cuando leastooodo lo que has escrito, te llevarás una mágica sorpresa.
me ha encantado!
abrazos y pedaleos inFINItos.
Fini

** MARÍA ** dijo...

Que bello y tierno poema, tan lleno de amor.

No hay nada más bello que estar enamorada y que te corresponda.

Besos,


** MARÍA **

Elita dijo...

Angie, gracias por visitarme amiga me alegra que te haya gustado, cariños y sonrisas.

Vicente, gracias por estar acá tu tb escribes hermoso. Un abrazo.

Lucila, un gusto conocerte me encantó tu blog y tus relatos así que nos estamos leyendo, besos y sonrisas.

Salvador, que bueno que vinieras a visitarme me encantó tu poema, saludines.

Death dog, gracias por tu visita, saludos.

Amor, veo que te gusto mi poema me alegro, cariños y sonrisas.

Supermamá, muchas gracias por venir a mi página tb me ha gustado mucho la tuya, cariños y besos.

Lagrimas de Mar, que bueno que te gustara también es una delicia leerte, besos y abrazos.

Slowhand, agradezco tu visita, saludos.

Fini, que tierna eres gracias por tu comment de verdad me gusta mucho como escribes y sé que lo haces de corazón al igual que yo, te mando muchos cariños y sonrisas.

María, gracias por venir y coincido plenamente contigo, besos y abrazos.

Miguel dijo...

"Quiero" ... Abrazar

Luli dijo...

Eres cuando escribes fiel a ti misma...

Un bellísimo poema de amor

Besos

Natasha dijo...

Hola Elita, pase a saludarte y de paso me vine a leer este hermoso poema cargado de pasión e ilusiones, en el qeu expresas tus depurados sentimientos, así es que aquí te dejo mi huella, y mi cariño

Besos con mucho querer de tu amiga

Natasha

lanobil, dijo...

Él habrá caído definitivamente rendido a tus pies al leer este poema, supongo. Un saludo y espero que puedas visitarme.

hoy dijo...

yo también quiero!!!!

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